Wednesday 30 October 2013

Alterations to storyline



00-04: On the beach, establishing shots of beach

    • 04-08 introducing bella
    • 08-12 introducing lee
    • 12-16 Bella crying
    • 16-20 Lee looking sad
20-35: group shots 
    • 20-25 waking up and packing
    • 25-30 packing the car
    • 30-35 motion scenes in the car - outside and inside
35-42: Bella singing up until 'never want it to go'
42-47: Nice gesture from lee to Bella
47-50: Opening door to flowers on doorstep
50-58: Car
    • 50-54 hand on gearstick 
    • 54-58 Bella singing into the mirror 
0:58-1:00: Clock Scene 'hungry for what was to come'
1:00-1:05: Bella singing on the beach 'now I'm longing for the way I was'

1:04-1:09: shot from behind characters of arriving at the beach
    • 1:09-1:13: shot from in front of characters of arriving at beach
    • 1:13-1:16: third shot from left of actors of again arriving at beach
    • 1:16-1:20: talking on the beach together

1:20-1:23: Argument of over shoulder shot leading up to lyric 'if your love isn't strong'
1:23-1:26: Argument from mid shot leading up to the same lyric
1:26- 1:27: 'if your love isn't strong' lyric from over shoulder shot
1:28-1:35: Back to back scenes: sitting back to back and Lee looks at another girl from selection of different camera angles
1:35-1:58: Crowd shots, slow motion dancing and general party environment
1:58-2:20: Looking across the room, Lee is flirting with other girls, Bella storms out 
2:20-2:28: Walking along the A14 Bridge - focus on the traffic - cars slow motion
2:28-2:36: Shots of Lee
2:36-2:44: shot which becomes out of focus of Bella walking behind Lee
2:44-2:47: Early morning bed shot, Bella gets out, from above, white bed sheets
2:51-3:06
    • 2:47-2:51: Holding hands shot, played in reverse (editing)
    • 2:56-3:06: Bella singing 'say you'll save me'
3:06- 3:16:Shots of Bella looking sad/depressed in different places
3:16-3:21: shot of lee and bella looking over pier into panning shot of beach
3:21-3:24: Really fast flicking between scenes
3:24-3:29: ^ this carries on with Bella faded on top singing 
3:29-3:36: Bella dancing on her own in the middle of the crowd/people
3:36-3:42: Bella arguing on the street with Lee
3:42-3:49: Bella on the beach singing up to 'would it ever be enough'
3:49-3:59: Bella confiding in somebody else, Lee sitting on his own
3:59-4:06: Bella and lee holding hands walking forward, zoom into hands and play 2nd half backwards (editing)
4:06-4:14: Bella walking away on the beach, panning shot to reveal lee 
4:14-4:23: Bella's crying shot played in reverse (in slow motion) so that the tears go up - she has been saved by walking away. 

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